Critique of final draft

I critiqued Nick's Paper.

The paper has a nice strong thesis that's very well written and clear. The paper also has a nice flow to it. It transitions from paragraph to paragraph very nicely. The subject of kindergarten was really interesting and the paper was written in a way that kept the reader interested and wanting to read more.

All the quotes that were used fit well into the text and were relevant to the paper. The paper does a good job of telling the reader the history of how kindergartens got started and how they progressed from something started on a farm to how they became commonplace today.

The only problem I can see is a few grammatical errors such as on page seven you use there instead of their. I only noticed a few errors like that throughout the paper.

Overall I think this is a great paper I'd give it a A.